Japanese Whispers
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Japanese Whispers
by ItsAGuess on Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:23 am
Time to go from bad to verse 
Here's an english-haiku version of a game of chinese whispers.
To play copy the haiku and change one word for your go. A repetition of a previous haiku or two goes in a row are not allowed.
The new haiku should follow the 5/7/5 meter, have one phrase over at least two lines, and make sense on its own (artistic licence allowed).
Lets see what we end up with...here we go:
An aging willow
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream.
(Please go to the last page of this thread to find the current haiku. Thanks)
The current haiku is ...
Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes
Here's an english-haiku version of a game of chinese whispers.
To play copy the haiku and change one word for your go. A repetition of a previous haiku or two goes in a row are not allowed.
The new haiku should follow the 5/7/5 meter, have one phrase over at least two lines, and make sense on its own (artistic licence allowed).
Lets see what we end up with...here we go:An aging willow
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream.
(Please go to the last page of this thread to find the current haiku. Thanks)
The current haiku is ...
Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes
Last edited by GTC4 on Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:52 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Updating)
ItsAGuess
Re: Japanese Whispers
by Bren on Mon Mar 23, 2009 4:18 pm
An aging window
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream
Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Re: Japanese Whispers
by ItsAGuess on Tue Mar 24, 2009 7:04 pm
An open window
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream
ItsAGuess
Re: Japanese Whispers
by chun on Thu Mar 26, 2009 9:19 am
An open window
its worn frame unsteady in
the flowing stream
[one word for two, to maintain haiku rules]
its worn frame unsteady in
the flowing stream
[one word for two, to maintain haiku rules]
chun
Re: Japanese Whispers
by Bren on Thu Mar 26, 2009 5:03 pm
An open window
its wood frame unsteady in
the flowing stream
its wood frame unsteady in
the flowing stream
Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Re: Japanese Whispers
by ItsAGuess on Thu Apr 02, 2009 3:50 pm
An orange window
its wood frame unsteady in
the flowing stream
its wood frame unsteady in
the flowing stream
ItsAGuess
Re: Japanese Whispers
by Bren on Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:00 am
An orange window
its wood frame unsteady in
the flowing air
its wood frame unsteady in
the flowing air
Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Re: Japanese Whispers
by ItsAGuess on Mon Apr 13, 2009 2:33 pm
An orange window
its wood frame unsteady in
freely flowing air
its wood frame unsteady in
freely flowing air
ItsAGuess
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