Japanese Whispers
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Japanese Whispers
First topic message reminder :
Time to go from bad to verse
Here's an english-haiku version of a game of chinese whispers.
To play copy the haiku and change one word for your go. A repetition of a previous haiku or two goes in a row are not allowed.
The new haiku should follow the 5/7/5 meter, have one phrase over at least two lines, and make sense on its own (artistic licence allowed).
Lets see what we end up with...here we go:
An aging willow
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream.
(Please go to the last page of this thread to find the current haiku. Thanks)
The current haiku is ...
Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes
Time to go from bad to verse
Here's an english-haiku version of a game of chinese whispers.
To play copy the haiku and change one word for your go. A repetition of a previous haiku or two goes in a row are not allowed.
The new haiku should follow the 5/7/5 meter, have one phrase over at least two lines, and make sense on its own (artistic licence allowed).
An aging willow
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream.
(Please go to the last page of this thread to find the current haiku. Thanks)
The current haiku is ...
Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes
Last edited by GTC4 on Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:52 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Updating)

ItsAGuess
Re: Japanese Whispers
Wobbly willows
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools

Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Japanese Whispers
ItsAGuess wrote:Wobbly sunshine
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools
Sorry Itsa, you have diverted from the 5/7/5 meter (1st line only 4, unless you pronounce wobbly as wobberly
The haiku reverts back to Marg's entry -
Warm summer sunshine
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools

GTC4- Forum Staff
Re: Japanese Whispers
Hot summer sunshine
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools

Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Re: Japanese Whispers
Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools

Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Re: Japanese Whispers
Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Mellow yellow notes
Baby ducks paddling over
Mellow yellow notes

Bren- Chain Letters Champ
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