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Japanese Whispers

Post by ItsAGuess on Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:23 am

First topic message reminder :

Time to go from bad to verse
Here's an english-haiku version of a game of chinese whispers.

To play copy the haiku and change one word for your go. A repetition of a previous haiku or two goes in a row are not allowed.

The new haiku should follow the 5/7/5 meter, have one phrase over at least two lines, and make sense on its own (artistic licence allowed).

Lets see what we end up with...here we go:

An aging willow
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream.


(Please go to the last page of this thread to find the current haiku. Thanks)

The current haiku is ...

Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes


Last edited by GTC4 on Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:52 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Updating)

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Re: Japanese Whispers

Post by Bren on Tue Oct 27, 2009 2:22 pm

Wobbly willows
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools

Bren
Chain Letters Champ


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Re: Japanese Whispers

Post by dancewithmarg on Tue Nov 03, 2009 7:49 am

Wobbly newborn
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools

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Japanese Whispers

Post by GTC4 on Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:36 pm

ItsAGuess wrote:Wobbly sunshine
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools


Sorry Itsa, you have diverted from the 5/7/5 meter (1st line only 4, unless you pronounce wobbly as wobberly )

The haiku reverts back to Marg's entry -

Warm summer sunshine
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools

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Re: Japanese Whispers

Post by Bren on Wed Nov 04, 2009 4:39 am

Hot summer sunshine
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools

Bren
Chain Letters Champ


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Re: Japanese Whispers

Post by ItsAGuess on Fri Nov 06, 2009 2:58 pm

Hot summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools

ItsAGuess


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Re: Japanese Whispers

Post by Bren on Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:11 pm

Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools

Bren
Chain Letters Champ


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Re: Japanese Whispers

Post by ItsAGuess on Sun Nov 15, 2009 2:37 pm

Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes

ItsAGuess


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Re: Japanese Whispers

Post by Bren on Tue Nov 17, 2009 12:03 pm

Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Mellow yellow notes

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