Japanese Whispers
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Japanese Whispers
by ItsAGuess on Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:23 am
First topic message reminder :
Time to go from bad to verse
Here's an english-haiku version of a game of chinese whispers.
To play copy the haiku and change one word for your go. A repetition of a previous haiku or two goes in a row are not allowed.
The new haiku should follow the 5/7/5 meter, have one phrase over at least two lines, and make sense on its own (artistic licence allowed).
Lets see what we end up with...here we go:
An aging willow
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream.
(Please go to the last page of this thread to find the current haiku. Thanks)
The current haiku is ...
Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes
Time to go from bad to verse
Here's an english-haiku version of a game of chinese whispers.
To play copy the haiku and change one word for your go. A repetition of a previous haiku or two goes in a row are not allowed.
The new haiku should follow the 5/7/5 meter, have one phrase over at least two lines, and make sense on its own (artistic licence allowed).
Lets see what we end up with...here we go:An aging willow
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream.
(Please go to the last page of this thread to find the current haiku. Thanks)
The current haiku is ...
Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes
Last edited by GTC4 on Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:52 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Updating)
ItsAGuess
Re: Japanese Whispers
by ItsAGuess on Thu Oct 15, 2009 3:53 am
Warm summer morning
Fluffy clouds racing over
Painted yellow skies
Fluffy clouds racing over
Painted yellow skies
ItsAGuess
Re: Japanese Whispers
by dancewithmarg on Sat Oct 17, 2009 10:48 am
Warm summer morning
Fluffy ducks racing over
Painted yellow skies
Fluffy ducks racing over
Painted yellow skies
dancewithmarg
Re: Japanese Whispers
by Bren on Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:37 pm
Warm summer sunshine
Fluffy ducks racing over
Painted yellow skies
Fluffy ducks racing over
Painted yellow skies
Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Re: Japanese Whispers
by ItsAGuess on Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:13 pm
Warm summer sunshine
Diving ducks racing over
Painted yellow skies
Diving ducks racing over
Painted yellow skies
ItsAGuess
Re: Japanese Whispers
by Bren on Fri Oct 23, 2009 3:08 am
Warm summer sunshine
Diving ducks racing over
Painted yellow pools
Diving ducks racing over
Painted yellow pools
Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Re: Japanese Whispers
by dancewithmarg on Fri Oct 23, 2009 10:03 am
Warm summer sunshine
Diving ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools
Diving ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools
dancewithmarg
Re: Japanese Whispers
by Bren on Sun Oct 25, 2009 3:30 pm
Warm summer sunshine
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools
Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Re: Japanese Whispers
by ItsAGuess on Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:42 am
Wobbly sunshine
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow pools
ItsAGuess
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