Japanese Whispers
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Japanese Whispers
by ItsAGuess on Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:23 am
First topic message reminder :
Time to go from bad to verse
Here's an english-haiku version of a game of chinese whispers.
To play copy the haiku and change one word for your go. A repetition of a previous haiku or two goes in a row are not allowed.
The new haiku should follow the 5/7/5 meter, have one phrase over at least two lines, and make sense on its own (artistic licence allowed).
Lets see what we end up with...here we go:
An aging willow
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream.
(Please go to the last page of this thread to find the current haiku. Thanks)
The current haiku is ...
Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes
Time to go from bad to verse
Here's an english-haiku version of a game of chinese whispers.
To play copy the haiku and change one word for your go. A repetition of a previous haiku or two goes in a row are not allowed.
The new haiku should follow the 5/7/5 meter, have one phrase over at least two lines, and make sense on its own (artistic licence allowed).
Lets see what we end up with...here we go:An aging willow
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream.
(Please go to the last page of this thread to find the current haiku. Thanks)
The current haiku is ...
Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes
Last edited by GTC4 on Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:52 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Updating)
ItsAGuess
Re: Japanese Whispers
by dancewithmarg on Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:45 pm
Thundery weather
Honey bees buzzing over
Painted rainbow hues
Honey bees buzzing over
Painted rainbow hues
dancewithmarg
Re: Japanese Whispers
by Bren on Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:07 am
Thundery weather
Honey bees buzzing over
Painted rainbow skies
Honey bees buzzing over
Painted rainbow skies
Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Re: Japanese Whispers
by dancewithmarg on Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:22 am
Thundery weather
Honey bees buzzing over
Painted yellow skies
Honey bees buzzing over
Painted yellow skies
dancewithmarg
Re: Japanese Whispers
by ItsAGuess on Sat Oct 10, 2009 9:32 am
Thundery weather
Honey clouds buzzing over
Painted yellow skies
Honey clouds buzzing over
Painted yellow skies
ItsAGuess
Re: Japanese Whispers
by Bren on Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:06 am
Thundery weather
Honey clouds racing over
Painted yellow skies
Honey clouds racing over
Painted yellow skies
Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Re: Japanese Whispers
by dancewithmarg on Mon Oct 12, 2009 10:21 am
Summery weather
Honey clouds racing over
Painted yellow skies
Honey clouds racing over
Painted yellow skies
dancewithmarg
Re: Japanese Whispers
by Bren on Wed Oct 14, 2009 4:56 am
Summery morning
Honey clouds racing over
Painted yellow skies
Honey clouds racing over
Painted yellow skies
Bren- Chain Letters Champ
Re: Japanese Whispers
by dancewithmarg on Wed Oct 14, 2009 4:36 pm
Summery morning
Fluffy clouds racing over
Painted yellow skies
Fluffy clouds racing over
Painted yellow skies
dancewithmarg
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