Japanese Whispers

by ItsAGuess on Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:23 am

First topic message reminder :

Time to go from bad to verse

Here's an english-haiku version of a game of chinese whispers.

To play copy the haiku and change one word for your go. A repetition of a previous haiku or two goes in a row are not allowed.

The new haiku should follow the 5/7/5 meter, have one phrase over at least two lines, and make sense on its own (artistic licence allowed).

Lets see what we end up with...here we go:

An aging willow
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream.

(Please go to the last page of this thread to find the current haiku. Thanks)

The current haiku is ...

Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes

by Bren on Fri Sep 04, 2009 2:56 pm

Confusing carrots,
Honey bees floating over
Viscous rainbow hues

by ItsAGuess on Sun Sep 06, 2009 1:02 am

Confusing carrots,
Honey bees buzzing over
Viscous rainbow hues

by Bren on Mon Sep 21, 2009 5:43 pm

Confusing weather,
Honey bees buzzing over
Viscous rainbow hues

by ItsAGuess on Wed Sep 23, 2009 6:25 pm

Confusing weather,
Honey bees clouding over
Viscous rainbow hues

by Bren on Thu Sep 24, 2009 4:46 am

Summery weather,
Honey bees clouding over
Viscous rainbow hues

by RedRedWin54321 on Sat Sep 26, 2009 9:30 pm

Summery weather,
Honey bees starving over
Viscous rainbow hues

by ItsAGuess on Wed Sep 30, 2009 7:23 pm

Summery weather,
Honey bees buzzing over
Viscous rainbow hues

by Bren on Fri Oct 09, 2009 9:44 am

Summery weather,
Honey bees buzzing over
Painted rainbow hues

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