Japanese Whispers

by ItsAGuess on Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:23 am

First topic message reminder :

Time to go from bad to verse

Here's an english-haiku version of a game of chinese whispers.

To play copy the haiku and change one word for your go. A repetition of a previous haiku or two goes in a row are not allowed.

The new haiku should follow the 5/7/5 meter, have one phrase over at least two lines, and make sense on its own (artistic licence allowed).

Lets see what we end up with...here we go:

An aging willow
its image unsteady in
the flowing stream.

(Please go to the last page of this thread to find the current haiku. Thanks)

The current haiku is ...

Soft summer music
Baby ducks paddling over
Painted yellow notes

by Bren on Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:29 pm

Strawberry donut,
Sugar glaze shimmering in
Viscous flowing fudge

by ItsAGuess on Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:41 am

Confusing donut,
Sugar glaze shimmering in
Viscous flowing fudge

by Bren on Wed Aug 12, 2009 3:14 pm

Confusing carrots,
Sugar glaze shimmering in
Viscous flowing fudge

by ItsAGuess on Sun Aug 16, 2009 9:46 am

Confusing carrots,
Sugar glaze shimmering in
Viscous violet fudge

by Bren on Tue Aug 18, 2009 12:01 pm

Confusing carrots,
Sugar glaze shimmering in
Viscous violet hues

by ItsAGuess on Sat Aug 22, 2009 12:09 pm

Confusing carrots,
Sugar glaze floating over
Viscous violet hues

(two words to maintain meter)

by Bren on Wed Aug 26, 2009 12:51 pm

Confusing carrots,
Sugar glaze floating over
Viscous rainbow hues

by ItsAGuess on Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:05 pm

Confusing carrots,
Honey glaze floating over
Viscous rainbow hues

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